Smiles shining like the teeth
of sunbeams on a sickle
The empty garish revenants
for love now long proved fickle.
You love me so, you love me not,
I - more fool to believe -
That teeth and tongue reciprocate
what minds so well deceive.
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Smiles shining like the teeth
of sunbeams on a sickle
The empty garish revenants
for love now long proved fickle.
You love me so, you love me not,
I - more fool to believe -
That teeth and tongue reciprocate
what minds so well deceive.
Delightful. The rhyme works wonderfully for me. Emily D's poetic style comes to mind.
Enjoyed very much.
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
Love this little poem - particularly the opening two lines.
H
love the tone, a sweet poem
This is presented with such beautiful dexterity!
Hill(rhymehater)walker loving your rhymes is a far greater compliment than I could possibly follow :D
(and I agree re: the opening lines)
Not sure about the title though... a little grandiose....