Punjabi Poem for Punjabi readers!

Punjabi Ghazal:)
by mazHur

Nairay nairay kion nahi aanday
darday kion ho japphi paanday!

siyaal diyaan raataan nikyaan nein
muk na jaawun gal mukaanday!

rabba ay dil kion ditta see
deyr nahi lagdi jinhoon gawaanday!

udeekday udeekday shamaan hoiyaan
ronday na taan hoar ki ganday!

gayee jawaanee hun kee karyay
royiyay pityay puniyay paanday!

matyaar koi jay lab jaandi
Naal ohday assi peengaan paanday!

kujh dassaaan gay kujh puchhaan gay
milay kadi jay aanday jaanday!

Shayr mere na sab toe vadhiya
baqi saaray leer paranday!

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Darn, couldn't make heads or tales of it :) Alas, I am so uncultured!

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Originally Posted by everyadventure

Darn, couldn't make heads or tales of it :) Alas, I am so uncultured!

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Oh, no, you're not:) This poem is in the language of the Sikhs and I thought why not post it for Sikh member on this forum something in their mother tongue for a change!!

anyway, thanks for dropping by!!:)

Would you feel that it loses something if you posted a translation? It's good to see you maz. I so rarely do these days.

Sasri call.


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Hi mazhur! I understood your ghazal partially. Don't you think it would be better to post a translation along with the original punjabi one?

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Originally Posted by aliengirl

Hi mazhur! I understood your ghazal partially. Don't you think it would be better to post a translation along with the original punjabi one?

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Hi Qim, nice to hear from you after ages, I hope you are keeping fine.

I am not around here much..just lazy and lack of mood!!:)

will work best and post the translation of my poem in due course..I hope you will enjoy reading my thoughts therein!!

tc
Best wishes to you and your family:)
maz