The Meeting of Boy and Girl
This story was inspired by true events, however, the actuall events didnt happen like this at all. This story came to be when I was rejected for a kiss.
Feedback is highly requested! please give feedback on the story and not the grammar or spelling please. ^_^
Btw.. when i say things like, There was Girl, or something like, Boy looked at Girl, it's ment to be like that. Boy and Girl is the character's names.
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CAST: Boy & Girl
There was one day in a gigantic city, where Boy was standing on the sidewalk with a sign, half his size, saying FREE HUGS. A few people stopped. One girl who thought it was funny stopped and hugged Boy. There was, also, a man with his girlfriend and a small child who all stopped and hugged Boy.
There was Girl, however, who saw his sign and walk his way and Boy noticed her intentions. Girl was beautiful, Boy thought, and he hoped that Girl would participate in his FREE HUGS service. Girl also thought Boy was fairly cute, quirky, and creative to come up with FREE HUGS on the corner of a big city street.
Girl finally got to Boy, “Can I have a Hug?” Girl asked.
“Well of course you can!” Boy said with a smile.
They hug, both with secret smiles and a warm feeling in the pit of their stomachs. They finished and Boy held his sign up again. ”Can I have a kiss?” Girl asked. Boy looked at her, then at his sign, then back at her, “Kisses cost extra.” Boy responds.
Girl couldn’t help but laugh to herself, she put her hand in her hoody pocket with her finger tips on her wallet. “What does it cost?” Girl asked.
Boy looked at her with a disappointed, and depressed face and responded.
”It costs a relationship.” Boy said.
Amazing drawing and story
The drawing is amazing and I enjoyed the story.
The ending to the story was surprising. I wasn't sure what Boy would say when asked what a kiss would cost. The only criticism I have is that I didn't understand why his answer should make him "disappointed" with a "depressed" look on his face.
I hope to read more.