Cool Love Calls

Half moon,
Brilliant stars,
The air is brisk.
Sweetheart's warm kiss.

A horse neighs.
Two lovers in the hay.
The coming of fall.
Cool love calls.

I Like that.
Very sweet, :)

Oh, my lost youth......... Thanks!

your poem has such brevity but is very sweet

I simply love this piece, short but sweet!
It's a bit like Chinese poetry!

cool love calls? Well...that's not very exciting, is it?
What ever happened to hot sloppy love? -- the kind where you have to pull yourself off the floor and brush the hay off your backside before returning to work :D

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Originally Posted by Abras

the kind where you have to pull yourself off the floor and brush the hay off your backside before returning to work :D

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^ Love doesn't have to be portrayed as hot and sexy and spicy, it can be portrayed as calm, sweet and sensual. :)

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Originally Posted by Abras

cool love calls? Well...that's not very exciting, is it?
What ever happened to hot sloppy love? -- the kind where you have to pull yourself off the floor and brush the hay off your backside before returning to work :D

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I'm no expert, I'm only 55, been around a little bit, but that sounds a bit more like lust. Not quite as satisfying and fulfilling. The poem is definitely a love poem, in the purest sense.

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Originally Posted by Abras

cool love calls? Well...that's not very exciting, is it?
What ever happened to hot sloppy love? -- the kind where you have to pull yourself off the floor and brush the hay off your backside before returning to work :D

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no doubt about it....there are all sorts of love....:party:

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Originally Posted by dafydd manton

that sounds a bit more like lust. Not quite as satisfying and fulfilling. The poem is definitely a love poem, in the purest sense.

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I Agree, I'm only 18, not been around as much, I know :P
But I agree with you definately. :)

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