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the day she left me
I threw away my watch
there was no sense then
keeping track of time
second by second, minute by minute
hour by hour!
Without my watch I am relieved
of keeping track of time
infact there is no need to do that
after you went away!
Now I wake up and sleep
by the wink of my eyes!
anytime my eyes wink to open up
I take it as Day;
Night comes whenever my winks close!
much more poignant than mine. I thought perhaps time would fly and you would not feel so trapped by it!
Very nice poem!
You threw away the time along with the watch!
Love hurts like the thorns of a rose.
Love stings like a yellow jacket.
Hope you find your watch back in no time!
Beautiful poem! It is very cute!
Time without a watch is stagnant, like life without love...
Lovely... Who needs a watch when everything is the same.
Very good too. I agree.Quote:
Originally Posted by BienvenuJDC
i deeply appreciate and am thankful to all of you for reading and commenting on my poem. :)
best wishes/Maz
Keep up the good work, and we'll keep reading. :DQuote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
Nice work out there!
ditto.Quote:
Originally Posted by BienvenuJDC
I like this poem, is very cute .. and I can understand it .. One of those poems that I don't need mr. google translator : ) I'm going to throw away my watch also :)
thanks y'all!!:)