In my senior writing class we had to write a letter to an angry customer that had received spam mail from a made-up company. Today he returned them to us and asked us to revise them. I would appreciate it if anyone could give me some tips to make this paper better, because I am stuck on what to do to revise it. My teacher said to fix prepositions mainly. All help would be greatly appreciated.
Dear Mr. Dewalt,
We are sorry for the e-mail with all of our member's e-mails, as this can cause our company some serious problems. We do not want to be fined for the mistake made by one of our employees. But I can assure you we have addressed the problem to the employee and it will not happen again. We have high qualifications for all of our employees and only hire the most competent of employees. Also, we have removed your e-mail address as you have requested and will not send you anymore spam mail. Lastly, I would like for you to have trust in our company as many customers do because the work that we do we do good. Thank you for your time in reading this letter.
Sincerly,
Jon Smith

