anyone can help me to make a sonnet with these ending words: Minds, love, finds, remove, mark, shaken, bark, taken, cheeks, come, weeks, doom, proved, loved.
should be 10 Syllables per line. please dont copy from Shakespears
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anyone can help me to make a sonnet with these ending words: Minds, love, finds, remove, mark, shaken, bark, taken, cheeks, come, weeks, doom, proved, loved.
should be 10 Syllables per line. please dont copy from Shakespears
Maybe you should do your own homework :pQuote:
Originally Posted by kenox
di-da di-da di-da di-da di-minds
di-da di-da di-da di-da di-love
di-da di-da di-da di-da di-finds
di-da di-da di-da di-da remove
di-da di-da di-da di-da di-mark
di-da di-da di-da di-da shaken
di-da di-da di-da di-da di-bark
di-da di-da di-da di-da taken
di-da di-da di-da di-da di-cheeks
di-da di-da di-da di-da di-come
di-da di-da di-da di-da di-weeks
di-da di-da di-da di-da di-doom
di-da di-da di-da di-da di-proved
di-da di-da di-da di-da di-loved.
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help me please :banana::banana::banana:
You replace the di-das in genji's post with words, that's how you do it.
but im foreign student , so i dont know much about the meaning of the words . that's why just need your help.
Minds means someone thinks it matters, and the bit of you that knows,Quote:
Originally Posted by kenox
Love means nil in tennis, yet somehow still it grows.
Finds are what you dig up, gold or pottery or glass,
Remove is taking something out, and Billy Bunter's class.
Mark is an evangelist, the second or the third;
Shaken isn't really the opposite of stirred;
Bark's a ship, a dog's word, and the skin of a tree,
Taken is a reading, also what it means to me.
Cheeks - well - yours are rosy, you lovely little sinner -
And come is what I will do if you ask me round to dinner.
Weeks and weeks is how long it will take to understand
That doom is final judgement, bitter fate and a command.
Proved is tested, certain, true, and sealed up with a kiss -
And loved is what you won't be when your teacher Googles this.
No one can help me?
No one is likely to write a poem for you. If you give it a try, I'm sure plenty of people will be happy to give you feedback. It is unreasonable to expect us to just do your homework for you, it doesn't help you and it inconveniences us.Quote:
Originally Posted by kenox
kenox, what is it exactly that you want the poem for? Is it schoolwork or just a personal interest? What's exactly your knowledge of English? In any case, if you don't have a good mastery of the language, you cannot move into English poetry, and therefore you won't be able to come up with something that can be called a sonnet. I don't mean to disappoint you, but you have to work on basic English first, and only then will you be able to learn about English poetry, but you need to move one step at a time. You say you are a foreign student, so do you have an English teacher who can give you personalized classes or something alike? If you don't, I think you will benefit from finding one as soon as possible.
thank you guys. I have tried to do my work, and i almost done this thanks very much for your encouranges
Post it if you can, kenox. Once it's done I'm sure you'll get more comments and maybe corrections, if people believe they are needed. Good luck :thumbsup: