Between your lips

Your upper lip is love
your lower lip is deep death
they both devour me

:lol: Interesting. There's something to that. :)

I love it!

This makes me "Hmmm." I cannot decide if I love it or hate it. Perhaps that's the point.....

love it. I give it a high brow and a low brow wink!

I thought it was going to be a poem about sticking your tongue out at someone. :D

I don't know if I like the use of "deep death", I think you could have used something different and profoundly increased the emotional effect, but the simplicity and wonder that you have captured in this poem is something to admire and I love how you've accomplished that! Fantastic work :)


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There's something so melodramatically wonderful about that "deep death" that it makes the poem for me. :D

@ Virgil

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@ skib

@ paperleaves

Thanks a lot for your observations, comments and appreciations.