Heart of Ice

A heart like
the snow
forever waits

for your breath
warm as the
wind

to melt
this coffin of ice
away...

simple but with deep meaning... nice, i like it. :thumbs_up

Thank you

this image of a "coffin of ice" is remarkably potent! nice poem!

I really like this

hi it's nice poem...I always feel peoms are very personal

only i cannot relate warm quality to breath!

Wots do you say!

cheers!

A wonderful little poem