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:lol: Good Lord.
:lol::lol::lol:I'm laughing at my own poem good lord!Quote:
Originally Posted by Virgil
Shouldn't "ring a lingy" be hyphenated? :lol: :D
I dunno. It's a bit Bukowski-ish.
[secretly laughing my, um, head off]
I don't know what to say. uhm the imagery is good? (lol)
*incredulous* *mouth agape*
:lol:
Good one! Enjoyed it thoroughly.:lol:
Great stuff! Particularly good: the nonchalant, matter-of-fact tone.
Freaking hilarious man!
This almost had me in the floor laughing.
Great stuff, let it rip! :lol:
...Who has the air freshener?
I just read my Coke bottle:
Listen closely &
hear the
happiness being
unleased
when you open
this bottle.
It made me think of the first part. :)
Stinky stuff... *Yes, Good Lord!* :lol: I guess you told him!
I have to echo Virgil's "Good Lord" only mine has an exclamation point or two. !! but it is undeniably funny, imaginative and well-written.
so you've returned to post fart poems eh!?
it has pretty good sound mechanics, but overall I'm with blp on this one.