Some Cinquains

Here's a few cinquains I came up with recently.

Needing a Lift

walking,
right arm outstretched,
thumb pointing to the sky,
the man in the rain watches cars
speed by.


Lurking Danger

the duck,
gently drifting
upon a peaceful pond,
doesn't detect the weed-hidden
hunter.


The Country Life

the cows
in the pasture
chew their cud while watching
the young boy at the pond reel in
a fish.


Little Brown Hitchhiker

A leaf
on my windshield,
whose stem is pinned beneath
the wiper blade, flutters as
I drive.

:thumbs_upI really like these! Especially the first one! good job.

"Needing a lift" is great! :)