Anniversary Thoughts

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10-03-2008, 06:01 PM
kiz_paws

Anniversary Thoughts

It was just a little diamond
more than he could afford
but he wanted something
that would last forever

Holding hands they walked
and laughed amongst
the crackling Fall leaves
"I wonder if Now is the moment", he thought

They made their way
to The Bench ...
an old familiar place ...
their place

Shyly he took her hand
covered it with his own
cleared his throat
and began

The ring was perfect
her smile was perfect
their kiss was perfect
their tomorrows would be perfect

*************************

A few years have passed
newlyweds they're not
their vows have been tested
but True Love lasts forever

Dedicated to my own dear "Mr.Paws" for our anniversary tomorrow.
Its not profound, but the words are true.

Love always
K♥zzo
10-03-2008, 06:19 PM
pussnboots

well here's wishing you and Mr.Paws a very happy anniversary!!!!
Enjoy the day!!!!
10-03-2008, 06:25 PM
Sweets America

Oh Kizzoo, that is so cute. :) I think Mr Paws is very lucky to have you, because to me, you are the little diamond. :)
10-04-2008, 11:37 AM
dibyendra

Quote:

Originally Posted by kiz_paws

It was just a little diamond
more than he could afford
but he wanted something
that would last forever

Holding hands they walked
and laughed amongst
the crackling Fall leaves
"I wonder if Now is the moment", he thought

They made their way
to The Bench ...
an old familiar place ...
their place

Shyly he took her hand
covered it with his own
cleared his throat
and began

The ring was perfect
her smile was perfect
their kiss was perfect
their tomorrows would be perfect

*************************

A few years have passed
newlyweds they're not
their vows have been tested
but True Love lasts forever

Dedicated to my own dear "Mr.Paws" for our anniversary tomorrow.
Its not profound, but the words are true.

Love always
K♥zzo

This poem would be a sincere gift, precious than the diamond, for Mr.Paws. Happy anniversary, Kiz!
10-04-2008, 03:06 PM
kiz_paws

Thanks so much for your comments and well wishes. :)
10-04-2008, 03:33 PM
Pendragon

Very Profound! Mr. Paws is a lucky man! :wave: Have a great day and life together!

Dale
10-04-2008, 03:35 PM
motherhubbard

it gave me happy tears, well, really more happy mist. Very nice, Kiz. Happy anniversary!
10-05-2008, 10:15 AM
qimissung

A very happy anniversary to you and Mr. Paws. May all your days be as bright and shining as the diamond he bought with such endearing hopefulness.
02-22-2009, 10:41 AM
Brolin

Ahh very nostalgic. good luck to you!
02-22-2009, 11:30 AM
LostPrincess13

Awww... That is so sweet!:D
A very charming token of affection.:)
Best wishes to both of you!:D
02-22-2009, 01:03 PM
PrinceMyshkin

Quote:

Originally Posted by kiz_paws

It was just a little diamond
more than he could afford
but he wanted something
that would last forever

Holding hands they walked
and laughed amongst
the crackling Fall leaves
"I wonder if Now is the moment", he thought

They made their way
to The Bench ...
an old familiar place ...
their place

Shyly he took her hand
covered it with his own
cleared his throat
and began

The ring was perfect
her smile was perfect
their kiss was perfect
their tomorrows would be perfect

*************************

A few years have passed
newlyweds they're not
their vows have been tested
but True Love lasts forever

Dedicated to my own dear "Mr.Paws" for our anniversary tomorrow.
Its not profound, but the words are true.

Love always
K♥zzo

Not profound? True, much as deep, abiding love is not profound!

Nothing you've ever posted here has been without at least a smidgen of love. May that deep well continue to nourish you and all those around or in contact with you!!!
02-24-2009, 03:57 AM
kiz_paws

Quote:

Originally Posted by PrinceMyshkin

Not profound? True, much as deep, abiding love is not profound!

Nothing you've ever posted here has been without at least a smidgen of love. May that deep well continue to nourish you and all those around or in contact with you!!!

**sniffs** Thank you so much for these words, Jer. ♥

And to all who read this, thanks for stopping by, it means a lot. :)
02-24-2009, 07:55 PM
andave_ya

aww kizzie! all the best!
02-25-2009, 04:19 AM
Lokasenna

That's really romantic - I'm sure he'll love it!
02-25-2009, 02:09 PM
Mr. Bergstrom

Simple but heartwarming. I liked how it wasn't too sentimental.

'Holding hands they walked
and laughed amongst
the crackling Fall leaves
"I wonder if Now is the moment", he thought'

My favourite stanza, I thought that the assonance prominent at the end of the lines worked well. 'crackling fall leaves' is a comforting image as well.

'They made their way
to The Bench ...
an old familiar place ...
their place'

I liked the sense of nostalgia here, I can relate to this in many different ways.

'Shyly he took her hand
covered it with his own'

I don't know why but I liked these lines, just like your choice of words in 'covered it with his own'.

Anyway nice poem, I did think it was going to have something of a downbeat ending though. The last stanza lead me to believe this but the last line proved otherwise.