Episode one: A script for a series

OOS: This is a script for a machinima series (video captured through video games,) and this has been a long project, I have been gathering lots of information, and this is what I have so far for the first episode

[Lt. Col. WATERS and Capt. JACKSON surveys an old structure from a tree, seeing four turret installments he radios Col. CONNORS who is aboard the UNSC Chernobyl.]

WATERS: This is Sierra Foxtrot Two Two to Sierra Foxtrot Three Five aboard the UNSC Chernobyl, Sir we have four covenant turret installations set up, mission still ago?

CONNORS: Roger that, take out all the turrets and do a clean sweep of the facility with captain Jackson

WATERS: Roger and Willco

[WATERS snipes all turret users within a few seconds, him and JACKSON get off the tree and look around the structure, finding nothing but plasma batteries, the turrets, and the dead elites. After reaching the gold lift and checking out the room, they radio CONNORS again.]

WATERS: Connors, sir, the place is abandoned, I don't know what they were protecting, but it's either gone or offline.

JACKSON: Yeah, I tried accessing the thing with (KELSEY/ECHO) but it kept rejecting (Her/His) codes.....They either moved the thing or deleted all the access codes. Permission to return to the Chernobyl, sir?

CONNORS: Copy that, permission granted.

[WATERS and JACKSON walk off screen and transition to the Chernobyl Armory. Marines talk about their recent missions, and one is in mid story when the Wolves (all except for JACKSON) walk up. Capt. KHOLE is among them]

KHOLE: SPARTANS ON DECK!

[All marines stand up, if they aren't already, and the wolves walk to their lockers, they begin to talk about the mission]

CONNORS: So, do you have any ideas as to what was there?

WATERS: No, it seemed like they were standing guard, protecting us from whatever was there....you know instead of protecting whatever was there from us?

[JACKSON runs in]

JACKSON: Sir, I just got word that my grandfather past away, I am leaving on the first shuttle to earth.

CONNORS: So, I need a replacement? Damn shame, it's going to be hard to replace you.

JACKSON: Thank you, sir, but no, I will be gone for about a month or so, be back before the covenant kick your ***.

[They laugh and transition to a shot of a corvette leaving a mothership in HW, when suddenly the small ship explodes and debris is seen falling.]

OOS: To be continued, this is not the end of the first episode....unless anyone thinks I should stop it there or should I continue on for a bit longer?