every moment leaves behind a smile...

i wish to write, of beauty and of you
but it`s hard to think about something,
i cannot seem to get thoughts through
as they all flow back to you

the rivers and streams of my shallow muse
all creep slowly towards the inevitable
i guess our minds may be infused
but my guessing just comes back to you

guessing what your thinking
what`s on your pretty mind?
and my soaring thoughts are sinking
all falling back to you

and yet i know you`ll catch them
arms open like petals of a rose catching the rain
the storm of my world is fading , leaving behind a gem
a gem most precious, filled with the memories you left

nothing more could a life desire
than to look back upon itself with a smile
and my world will reach ever higher
until the heavens await below

and when you leave, my world will fall
into a heaven of remembrance
calming a worldly squall
an eternity of memories is all i require...

I like this one too...you write very well. I love the forth stanza. It is filled with such imagetry and beauty, with the rose, rain, gem, and all. It really caught me and froze me for a second. Thank you so much for sharing this one...it is very nice.

It is good to have someone to make us smile. You have some nice lines here.

i wish to write, of beauty and of you

i don't know why but i just really like that line

Your poem reminds me that there are some good reasons for being alive and taking chances!

goldenrod.

thanks alot everyone
this is kind of an important piece to me so your encouragement really means alot to me

This stuff is something that speaks lots of what the stuff love is in substance.