Violets of Violence

Violets

The violets
are back in bloom.
Blue, black and purple patches
adorn her tender landscape.

Planted by his calloused hands,
the favorite flowers of the violent,
sprout beneath a shower
of tears.

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Originally Posted by Xillus_Xavier

Violets of Violence

The violets
are back in bloom.
Blue, black and purple patches
adorn her tender landscape.

Planted by his calloused hands,
the favorite flowers of the violent,
sprout within a shower
of tears.

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Your poem is metaphoric. Indeed a figure of speech.

I like this kind of poem, reality is vivified indeed.

Here you presented a circumstance that is unruffled serenity.
And you did not withhold the reality that beguiles a beauty.

I decided to drop "Violence" from the title to make the subject more subtle.