the finding

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the finding

i've ridden the waves of despair
and hugged to me the courage of my heart
always knowing that somewhere i will find you

if i reach across the ocean
will you take my hand and pull me the rest of the way?
will you light the way and scatter the shadows?

if i wander across the universe
barefoot and starry eyed
will you find me there and bring me home?

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Originally Posted by CdnReader

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the finding

i've ridden the waves of despair
and hugged to me the courage of my heart
always knowing that somewhere i will find you

if i reach across the ocean
will you take my hand and pull me the rest of the way?
will you light the way and scatter the shadows?

if i wander across the universe
barefoot and starry eyed
will you find me there and bring me home?

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cdn/13oct07
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Of course I do,
For in life I too am seeking for you

For life without you is
pretty dull
And of course a partner, indeed a real partner
is what immortalize every mortal

Life' s course is very coarse
without your company
for with someone accompany all the time
makes life a great symphony

Life is love's only nest
I want someone to join me
in the construction of it.
And when we set together both in strife and difficulty
We can of course make all our needs meet.

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Originally Posted by CdnReader

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the finding

i've ridden the waves of despair
and hugged to me the courage of my heart
always knowing that somewhere i will find you

if i reach across the ocean
will you take my hand and pull me the rest of the way?
will you light the way and scatter the shadows?

if i wander across the universe
barefoot and starry eyed
will you find me there and bring me home?

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cdn/13oct07
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Wonderful! Especially the last verse and most especially

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barefoot and starry eyed

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That juxtaposition of the persona's helplessness & her continuing hopefulness is rich, rich, rich!

Yes, I agree with Jer about the line
'barefoot and starry eyed',
well done!
The closing line is sweet.

Thanks so much, Blaze, PM, and Sweets. :)

I agree with Jerry and Sweets. Practically all your poems touch my heart. Your poetry makes so many people say, "Yes, I've been there". Especially I love the imagery you use. Hm, I think I've said that before. Never mind. It's true.

Thanks, Barbara. Always appreciate your comments. :)