The Day Of The Towers

When The Towers Of Freedom Fall,
When The Fires Of Hell Burn,
When The Smoking Furls Of Death Enthralls,
A Frightened People Turn,
To Their Leader, To Their Country,
To Their Morals, To Their Lord,
To Find A Kind Of Answer,
To Hear A Healing Word...

When The Fires Have Been Extinquished
When The Choking Smoke Clears,
When The Rubble Has Been Swept Away,
When Love Has Dried The Tears,
A Proud Nation Shall Become,
A Nation Standing Tall,
Taller Than The Fallen Towers,
With Justice And Liberty For All! N. Lee Austin

I Would Like To Introduce My Self, N. Lee Austin, Number Ten Of Fifteen Children Raised In A Five Room House Built By Mama While Daddy Worked, Some May Have Thought Us Poor But We Were Very Rich In Encouragement To Dream, Catch The Dream Live The Dream. I Am An Author, Song Writer And Poet, Sometimes Opinionated. Thank You Nla

Hi NLA, welcome to the forums. I hope you like it here. Frequently people post when they want comments on their poetry. I read your poem, and it has no feeling. I feel like I'm reading from an automaton. What you write about is a VERY emotional event. It ends with a cliche, and sort of just lack luster nationalism. It shows promise, but I think you can put so much more into this if you really want. Please don't be discouraged. I look forward to more.

Who Is B Mental, I Don't Like Somebody Else Putting Their Name On My Work, Whether You Like It Or Not It Better Get Removed!!!

LOL, welcome to the forums...lighten up there mate! Cheers!

N. Lee Austin, please familiarise yourself with public discussion forums.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Internet_forum

By responding to your topic, nobody 'puts their name' on your work, they're merely offering a response of welcome, feedback, and/or opinion.