differences w/ paris and romeo
ok heres the deal. im in 9th grade in high school and i hav a pretty tough english teacher who lets us do alot of essays. Essays is my hardest thing to do. I jsut cant get what i need down on the paper. so i have an essay due 2morrow on the differences between Romeo and Paris. im need help on two things. the thesis and the conclusion which are the two hardest things for me to do. heres my thesis: "Although Romeo and Paris resent each other and are bitter enemies, the two characters are very similar." Its pretty simple but my english teacher doesnt like simple. he wants something that is very discriptive, and something that sounds like a professional writer would say. and as for the conluding paragraph, i hav no idea what to say. can any1 please help me out. if u just give me a lead, then i can go from there and work on it to make it sound better. thanks
