hi, here r some of my poems on love, nostalgia and whatever...
cheers
rockz
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hi, here r some of my poems on love, nostalgia and whatever...
cheers
rockz
I liked "I won't say" and "classroom notes" a lot! Thoughthe latter one did make me wonder at the plight of us poor teachers! ;)
Open your shirt , I wanna see ur heart - is an excellent line!
The first part of Wanna chat ? I really liked.
You have really good titles on your poems, they make me want to read them. I always have problem finding good titles.
I personally don't want to write about love. Love is a term that gets thrown around way to much. I like writing about things i can relate to.
I too like that line in particular.
and classroom notes rocks socks
and u know what, most of them r class room notes!! :)
my girl friend maybe sitting in the class,
totally engrossed in whatever is going on in the class, whatever mathematical notations
the professor jots on the black-board
and i'll be just on the other side, looking at her sometimes,
in a dreamy world, and wondering why she isn’t eyeing at me even once.
then comes a sparrow by the corridor, chatters something,
picks up anything on the floor and flutter away.
when the prof. gave away notes, I’ll be
sitting, my head bent, and writing out my own ‘classroom notes’,,
but phoenix_tears, how u say u cant relate to love?
in my life i think love is the most finest thing u can relate to
sindhu, thnx 4 the comments but so many times
i've wondered if it's not better to wander thru
the fairy land, of dreams n leaves n swiftly flowing
streams rather than constrict myself to some y=mx+c
and isagel, i've so many titles with me, titles
without poems.. i donno wat to do with them, but
i write it down somewhere sometimes and 4get it later,,
take it from someone who has spent a lot of time among imaginary trees , leaves, and flowing streams. When you are in class, you damn well better pay attention. We all daydream, but it is important to discipline yourself to the task at hand. This is especially true of writers.
Love is a waste of time, and in my experience, it always ends in heartache. The pain i've seen it cause is not worth the dust on my shoes.
Oh, How I agree! But have you found the way of stopping it from happening? If so,I WISH you would share the secret with me.Quote:
Originally Posted by Phoenix_Tears
pain
without pain
love is incomplete
well i understand
when u say the disaster it can bring to ur life
but life's like that, no?
like sindhu said, u cant stop it from happening?
some people cry cuz they are not in love
some people cry cuz they are in love
some people cry cuz they are not in love but in love
some people cry cuz they are in love but not in love
anyways you cry :( , no? is it?
have you found a way to escape from itz vicious tentacles?
if something which u so ardently follow so fervently crave for,
is a waste of time,,
rockseaJust, don't care. You'll happily tumble to your doom ;)Quote:
anyways you cry :( , no? is it?
have you found a way to escape from itz vicious tentacles?