The early summer morning's bright,
and the vibe of a mini park's right,
so I gaze amorously
at a pink daisy nearby.
Regrettably,
she turns her goo-goo eyes
towards the nonchalant sunlight
in the distant skies.
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The early summer morning's bright,
and the vibe of a mini park's right,
so I gaze amorously
at a pink daisy nearby.
Regrettably,
she turns her goo-goo eyes
towards the nonchalant sunlight
in the distant skies.
Charming and humorous poem! itīs good to have you posting again, angliholic.
Thanks, Danik, for your feedback, but why did you think it's charming? Which part is charming?Quote:
Originally Posted by Danik 2016
The images and the composition are charming, the flower instead of a woman.
Thanks, Danik, for the crystal clear feedback.Quote:
Originally Posted by Danik 2016
:) Enjoyed the "vibe" of a subject so tender.
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Thanks, Tailor, for reading and the encouraging comment.Quote:
Originally Posted by tailor STATELY