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You are so precious to me
that I could hardly dare
to write a poem
glorifying you
You are so precious to me
that I timidly enter
adjectives to illustrate you
secretly doubting that they are not
worthy of such a fascination
You are so precious to me
that I strive not to illuminate,
through attributes and metaphors,
the paths and avenues leading to you
For, so many beautiful women
Might flock around such a delicacy
to direct all its attention to them
You are so precious to me
Beautiful poem. Enjoyed the refrain and the way it was purposely omitted in S4 :)
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Thanks, tailor, I am glad you liked it.Quote:
Originally Posted by tailor STATELY
What is "S4"?
S4 would be the 4th stanza... I liked how the refrain was not included in S4, but rather set apart as S5 to make it stand out... the refrain being the element in the poem that repeats :)
A stanza (S) is a grouping of lines, with a rhythmic pattern or not. A line would be designated as (L)... so S5 is also L17 :)
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Oh, I see! Thank you, tailor. PC abbriviations are not so known to me. :smile5:
Some people want beauty
Some people want money
Some people want duty
Some people want cloudy, some sunny
I wanted the truth
I wanted the verity
From my early youth
I wanted sincerity
The ugliness of your inherited three
If you know the truth jack
The most beautiful man you may be
Even if you are Cyrano de Bergerac
I think you are an angel
Although everyone considers you
An ordinary human being
Only I notice how grass caresses
Your feet when you walk accros a meadow
I think you are from another planet
Where the world is most beautiful and loving
Although everyone sees you
Just like an average person from here
Only I see numberless stars in your eyes
Which our telescopes have never discovered
When you talk I think that your soul talks
And not the usual talking organs of which we know
Although no one pays attention to what and how you talk
Only I can feel the mild warmth
Gleaming from your body
And touches the person you talk to
With the most amiable embrace of all
Thread
... and still I do.
I wonder why don't you...?
http://tse4.mm.bing.net/th/id/OIP.Wo...dd&o=5&pid=1.1
So glad to see you posting again. :) Enjoyed the bare minimalism of the above. Link: So many thoughts...
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Tank you, tailor. It is so pleasant to hear such words... I mean, to read such words. :)
Let it be fully totally completely safely for us all
Do you think it is possible
To fall in love with someone
Who you even don't know
How does she or he look like?
Do you understand what am I talking of?
Do you have a wish to make it real
With me in this "story"
Where I've been waiting since... hmmm...
Can you, would you, may you...?
Such a touching poem :) ... goes well with your recent link: http://tse4.mm.bing.net/th/id/OIP.Wo...dd&o=5&pid=1.1
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Thank you, tailor.
Here's one joke to make you smile.
"Men are either inadequate, or occupied or unreachable."
(I am not sure about the last word in the joke: does it express the exact meaning it wants, i.e. somebody who is too high above the woman who wants him.)
hmmm... men are many things beyond those listed in your joke; I would disagree with the premise of the last statement.
~tailor
He-he! You mean, nobody is "unreachable"? Maybe you are right. One should only find the way.