Amusement Park

Amusement Park

It's so much fun
to love going to
the amusement park.

Who doesn't get a
thrill riding
up into the clouds
and screaming while
rolling down the other side?

It's a wholesome
natural high
a safe addiction
that leaves you looking for the
next ride.

So your in a low
dark rainy valley
and you want a
mountain peak
to climb?

You have a vitamin
D deficiency.

My peaks can't
give you the sun
you need
because its always
snowing here
for 6 months
straight.

They are...
Well, they just
aren't sufficient
to meet your
meeds.

Move along
and find
another mountain
To climb.

It's a wonderful ride while reading this poem of yours. And of course, I have to read between the lines. Well done.

Fun like the amusement parks you write of.

Yeah...the subject matter is pretty unappealing.