*evil laugh!* thank you! don't ask me why i had the evil laugh thingy, i'm being random! but honestly, thank you. i appreciate it. i enjoyed writing, which is kinda a stupid statement 'cause who doesn't enjoy writing there own poem. real quick, how old are you. you don't have to tell me if you don't want to, but i was just crious.
That is AMAZING. I love it...the images mixed with beauty. The dark touch and the questions of the unknown. Wonderful.
"The Future's Cry"By me Our souls are dying; As they claim to heal. We are lost in the shadows, No light shines in our world. We hunger for the human touch, We look for the human soul. But our core had killed us. There seems to be no angels in this desolate world. It is a prison, a cell for the dead; A bottomless hole. No principles stand. How long can we hold on? How long can we survive? We reach out for warmth, To be burned by ashes.
understatement of how incredible the human mind is... to a degree it's kinda of scary... the mind is despertly wicked, but at the same time it is also desperatly amazing and baffaling. (if that's how you spell it)
Anytime! I also write the best when I am upset. Though, I find it so much easier to be sad, so if I ever need to write well, I just think of really sad things. The human mind is an incredible thing.
yes, i find it interesting, too. the thing that gets me is that i normally only write "good" poems when i'm upset in some manner. so that's why most of poetry is bad, because i'm not upset enough, or sad enough, to think of something. lol, kinda annoying! and thank you for offering your time to here my petty little problems.lol. i appreciate it.
Well, I will always listen if you need a friend to talk to. Just send me an PM about anything. I think if the poetry comes from your heart it is good. And the standard of whether it is good enough to share is your own too. I would be willing to read anything you write. It is cool that we share poetry as a release though!
sorry it took me so long to reply.. i've been busy. i really don't talk to my friends. i mean, i do, but its more on a shallower level. its not because i don't trust them, it just that most of my friends i don't feel that confortable talking to. there's this one kid i wish i could talk to, but he's always somehow busy. so, like you, i resort to poetry. i actually stink at it very badly, most of the stuff i end up throughing away, but once in a while i find write something worth sharing.
Basically, you said that if the dark colors aren't really effecting you as a good person as a whole, then there really is not problem liking dark colors. Atleast that is what I got from it. I agree totally. I am generally a happy bright person. When I feel darker or emotionally down, I release that feeling through poetry or talking to friends. How do you rid yourself of darker feelings?
exactly! I'm so atracked to dark colors! i don't think myself as a dark person either... I think of it like this- All things in moderation... If i'm living in darkness, yes there is a problem. if my thoughts are dark, then yes, there's a problem. if the dark colors are EFFECTING me to think be depressed or have "dark" (evil) feeling or emotions, then maybe i should shed some brightness... but if i'm not being effected, i think it is okay to like dark colors. er, i'm not sure if that is really what i'm trying convey, but i think i got it. lol. your thoughts?
