I say what I mean my love. If something needs improving I'll say it. The story really was brilliant and those two things are the only things I would have changed. I would like you to be as honest with me my love. If you think something I write needs changing, I would love for you to tell me. It's the only way I'll get better.
Hrmm... I'm going to work on the similar openings thing... I will. I think. And that's because you're bias, yea?
Really the only thing that needed changing was that a lot of sentences had very similar openings, and sometimes it didn't feel right because we were looking at things from a bottle's point of view. I like the idea but it was weird sometimes. But It was brilliantly written and I liked it a lot.
Yea, but you're bias. I don't think this story was as good as the others. I didn't actually draft it. But it was alright. It was hard to cut down to less than 600 words. It was supposed to be 500...
Lol, I thought I told you I did. probably just dreamed it. Yes I read the story. It was brilliant. I liked that it was from the point of view from the bottle. You have an excellent imagination dear.
GRAMMAR MOST CERTAINLY DOES MATTER!! Then again I'm bias. Did you read that story I wrote?
lol bad grammar doesn't matter so long as you get the message
Cute. The voice in your head has bad grammar.
There's a little voice in my head saying "I got the most beautiful and adorable girl in the world"
There is a little voice in my head saying something... "WOOHOO!!"
