If you could read my short story at - http://www.online-literature.com/for...ad.php?t=38884 - i would greatly appreciate it, it seems you write about the same emotional status as i do.
Its short, but well written. I enjoyed the repetition of certain words that helped emphasize the fear of the character. You could probably write an entire book on that concept, not giving the character a name also works well with taking away the compassion and humanity in the story. Its good.
Not yet, but i will when i have some time, just attempting to plan my 6month journey in china xD
thx for telling me. but i really was super bored and wasnt thinking strai twhen i wrote that. have you checked out my other story?
