i really have zero creatuvity right now. I can't think of something that i could write well. I'm jjust doing these storys to see what i can do. but i will make a long story in a bit
Your story seemed a bit too short, and a massacre is usually more than one 'attempted murder'. All your stories seem to be lacking descriptive content aswell. Just some constructive criticism so you can improve on your writing. Try to take some time when writing your next story, make it atleast 1,000 words. Re-read it about 3 times and and change some sentence structure, add in new descriptive words etc.
Done, Futile Fury is what its called.
You mean somone who is crazy at a wedding? I really don't know s***t about weddings but i will try. lol
Ok, well i just got your message and it seems like a great idea lol. I would like you to write about; A dementia sufferer, at a wedding!
I want to have a challenge with u. You and i will right a story about something. Each of us choose what each other write about. Like I want you to write about.hmmm... this will be a suprise... A combat seen. Whatever time period. I want you to message my as soon as you get this and tell me what you want me to do.
I just wrote a piece called two days till freedom, a very short story i thought about when we were learning about hitlers wrath. Only it takes place in some other eastern country. I don't know where though.lol. Oh and there is no jew killing i swear!
It seems good, although you could elaborate more detail into the face of the character, throw some descriptive words in there. This seems like an adaptation of your other story with the vampire, maybe you could adapt them together and get a not-so-short story rolling?
hey, will u look at my most recent story and tell me what u think? thx
martydom=great! continue the great work. You may have noticed that I write alot about violence. I'm not wierd, i'm just into action and drama and fire. Guess my name says it all. I just found this website. and i also just started writing. i have about 2 days of experience. I take no writing classes. its good to know someone enjoyes my work. its also good to have a friend. maybe you and i could help each other and review each others work!lol
