Conversation Between Beautifull and Maximilianus

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  1. Hi , I wrote this on the cinquain game:

    The night
    She waved goodbye.
    Thus bound to be, but why?
    My stalwart, fierce and one ally,
    Thus died...


    and you said it was beautiful though sad. Thanks. It's a variant of a verse from a poem I wrote some time ago in Spanish, for a poetry contest where I often participate. It got to semifinals It's about a man mourning for his beloved as she agonizes in a hospital bed. I haven't written a full English version though. It's difficult to adapt from one language to another, especially if you want to meet rhyme and metric patterns. Tough job
  2. Hi Maxy!
  3. Ttfn.
  4. Goodnight Beaut. See you later


  5. Goodnight Maxey.

    Sleep Well.
  6. I will follow your advice. Thanks for everything
    You take care too and sleep very well
  7. Yeah, you're right...especially since you said yourself you haven't really slept much...I guess it's a good thing you want to sleep now. Play some soft music, close your eyes and relax. I think that's exactly what you need. Take care of yourself. And feel better in the heart.
  8. I'm feeling sleepy too. Maybe it should be better to follow the feeling and get some rest
  9. really? Well, I don't know... Actually I'm feeling sleepy right now...how weird.
  10. No, it's not It's against all reasonable biological clock
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