Literature Network Forums - Blogs - title by manny2 https://www.online-literature.com/forums/blog.php?40101-title The largest classic literature discussion forum on the Internet. Read Write Teach Share. en Sat, 06 Jun 2026 03:09:38 GMT vBulletin 10 https://www.online-literature.com/forums/images/misc/rss.jpg Literature Network Forums - Blogs - title by manny2 https://www.online-literature.com/forums/blog.php?40101-title For my dads birthday, please help me improve this : ) https://www.online-literature.com/forums/entry.php?6713-For-my-dads-birthday-please-help-me-improve-this-) Tue, 04 Nov 2008 06:29:45 GMT Happy Birthday Dad. I will always be your little girl, from the times we went fishing, up to the moments we argue. The bond between a father... Happy Birthday Dad.

I will always be your little girl,
from the times we went fishing,
up to the moments we argue.

The bond between a father and daughter,
and the memories we have shared,
will never be broken.

Although I am getting older,
and the times we see each other may be few,
I will always seee myself as daddy's little girl.

Happy Birthday,
Love always your daughter.


This poem is going to go on a picture frame next to a picture of me and my dad, so i need help making this perfect! please help! ]]> manny2 https://www.online-literature.com/forums/entry.php?6713-For-my-dads-birthday-please-help-me-improve-this-) <![CDATA[manny2's Blog]]> https://www.online-literature.com/forums/entry.php?5044-manny2-s-Blog Tue, 01 Apr 2008 16:38:39 GMT "Selfish at Heart"

Crude actions come from this girl,
with dark in her eyes,
and no warmth in her heart.

On the path to destroy others,
prancing around as a princess
when really a witch within.

Begging for attention
around every corner she can get.
Selfish actions, pushing down others.

Fake in her words,
only pretending to care for others.
When really in her heart,
its not about others,
but her selfish well being,
and destroying the happiness of all around. ]]> manny2 https://www.online-literature.com/forums/entry.php?5044-manny2-s-Blog <![CDATA[manny2's Blog]]> https://www.online-literature.com/forums/entry.php?3909-manny2-s-Blog Mon, 10 Dec 2007 10:19:03 GMT so.. this is what i write when i get very annoyed that i cannot fall asleep. not for the life of me. i would be happy with 5min of sleep and no... so.. this is what i write when i get very annoyed that i cannot fall asleep. not for the life of me. i would be happy with 5min of sleep and no thoughts...

ugh...

***Wouldn't it be nice***

The mind goes restless,
and body finally lazy.

no important thoughts to come.
only an ambiguous cycle of nothing,
staring at the wall.

one recurrent thought;
wouldn't it be nice,
to fall asleep,
have the mind rest in peace?

A true escape of reality,
to sleep with no thoughts.
Only dreams if any.
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]]> manny2 https://www.online-literature.com/forums/entry.php?3909-manny2-s-Blog <![CDATA[manny2's Blog]]> https://www.online-literature.com/forums/entry.php?3832-manny2-s-Blog Mon, 03 Dec 2007 20:16:01 GMT A body lays; cold and unmoving. A needle injected; Pierced through the skin. The veins flowing with harsh fluid; Waiting for one last buzz,... A body lays;
cold and unmoving.
A needle injected;
Pierced through the skin.
The veins flowing with harsh fluid;
Waiting for one last buzz,
That will never come again. ]]> manny2 https://www.online-literature.com/forums/entry.php?3832-manny2-s-Blog <![CDATA[manny2's Blog]]> https://www.online-literature.com/forums/entry.php?3592-manny2-s-Blog Fri, 09 Nov 2007 13:49:04 GMT My thoughts inside are torn apart Half of my heart wants you --no matter what The other half is telling me to let you go I cant do that You’re... My thoughts inside are torn apart
Half of my heart wants you --no matter what
The other half is telling me to let you go

I cant do that
You’re my world
My best friend
Who I have become
Is because of you

Am I the one for you?
Or am I a pawn in this circle of people
Are you playing games on me;
Which were once played on you?

Is this revenge to the one who hurt you?
Who are you to play with feelings;
That are not your own.
To torment someone as much as you were once.

Tears of rivers
Flowing down my face
My heart breaking
As I fall to the ground
Unable to stand
Look you in the eye
For those two words said to me

“Its over”

I hope you are happy
You have destroyed
What was once left of me. ]]> manny2 https://www.online-literature.com/forums/entry.php?3592-manny2-s-Blog <![CDATA[manny2's Blog]]> https://www.online-literature.com/forums/entry.php?3549-manny2-s-Blog Mon, 05 Nov 2007 03:50:27 GMT this is probably my favorite poem that i have written.... critiques or comments would be nice :) Behind the Shadows Standing in the darkness;... this is probably my favorite poem that i have written.... critiques or comments would be nice :)


Behind the Shadows

Standing in the darkness;
Behind the shadows
There was a girl.

Her head low to the ground
Eyes shut with tears streaming down;
Shaking her head, in misery and disbelief.

Finally opening her eyes,
looking up to blackness around her.
her eyes piercing with hate.

An avalanche of problems
Stumbled on her;
Life itself taking a toll on this girl.

With her addiction at hand,
Unable to get out of this depression.
Giving up hope, having no more interests.

Uncaring about anything passing her way;
Finally completely pushed to the ground.
There is no way up from where she stands now.

No company around,
No friends to come,
No one to trust,
No one to be around.

Alone she stands.
Behind the shadows,
Waiting in the darkness;
For her time to come. ]]> manny2 https://www.online-literature.com/forums/entry.php?3549-manny2-s-Blog <![CDATA[manny2's Blog]]> https://www.online-literature.com/forums/entry.php?3528-manny2-s-Blog Fri, 02 Nov 2007 19:56:14 GMT most of my poems are sad, and depressing. thats all i can really write about so itll turn out good.. if you dont like that, then dont read... most of my poems are sad, and depressing.

thats all i can really write about so itll turn out good..

if you dont like that, then dont read them!

Best feeling in the world
all smiles
no coming down
its like I'm flying
the fall might be a little rough
but I cant stop moving
put the music on
let this feeling roll
lets get it going

best feeling in the world
don't disappear from me now
keep the music going
keep on moving
take deep breaths
let it out
oh this feeling

slowly coming to an end
sad but true
but it was oh so good
I'd do it all over again ]]> manny2 https://www.online-literature.com/forums/entry.php?3528-manny2-s-Blog <![CDATA[manny2's Blog]]> https://www.online-literature.com/forums/entry.php?3499-manny2-s-Blog Tue, 30 Oct 2007 17:42:57 GMT I feel like everyone lies to much, so i wrote this because its basically how i have been feeling... ... I feel like everyone lies to much, so i wrote this because its basically how i have been feeling...

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Life is about trust,
Without trust you have nothing.
No relationships, no friends, just nothing.

I trusted to easily,
Fell so hard into the lies.
Believed what you said,
Knowing none of it was true;
Just wishing it was.

You lied to me.
Said I could trust you,
But that is not true.
Although I know the truth
The lies will always be there,
Only reflecting you.

What we had is gone,
You let your lies ruin it all.
Too afraid to say the truth
But I am no better;
For I sit there and believe you
When I know better.
All you have for me is lies
Life is about trust,
Without it there is nothing. ]]> manny2 https://www.online-literature.com/forums/entry.php?3499-manny2-s-Blog