This is one of my most personal works. For it is about a conversation a had with my Dad (whom I had practically never known my whole life) when I was about fifeteen and it brought about a huge epiphany. It begins with a unbearable stroke of apathy, for which the narrator is then reconciled by his father. I didn't include quotes, I don't know why, they just looked ugly. Sorry for the confusion. It's almost embaressing posting this, for I know that it is a bit overdone, ...
The black night slowly rises And the skinny beggars are unveiled Their rough woods sticking out Tragic, but for so long they grew Stretching their arms out To come close to the world, Reaching from the depths Of passionless isolation For the days of old memory Of waving grass in summers breeze Are now gone Buried and embedded in the dead landscape Of subtle white beauty
I see that the rain is coming down as I sit from above and see it pilt the windowsill (but only slightly) I listen to the tunes of Ellington and the ecstasies of the 20s’ with the trees in the wind frivently dancing to the airs of the blows within each ear, as the wind hesitates mumbles, stumbling on trying to find its own tune Oh the partyhall of dancers, may it be the carousing trees, drunk as they are With wind ...
Cannot be posted here because the posting code messes up the indents, which are important. I consider this one of my most mature and expressive works (though since it's in part autobiographical you don't have to understand it entirely). here's a link http://danielbenoit.blog.com/2009/08/03/the-thought/
Updated 09-10-2009 at 11:56 PM by DanielBenoit
Si renderanno conto un giorno Saprà un giorno Maybe ignorance will tire fault And the clouds will overcome the moon The moon, will be at fault. Haze of hazelnut coffee Dreary over eyes Too much of late; 9:45 Humid, no rain (It rained last night). Pressure over my head Sleep brought over my head Bulb falling from the ceiling Bouncing off the table Smashing upon the ground ...