View RSS Feed

Silas Thorne's Journal

Walking on the beach

Rate this Entry
Where's hot to stand
some things bear walking on.
Where sharp rocks on a yellow beach
speak painfully to my bare feet
a bondless bondsman sheds his tears.
Wash off the sand, the sand collects.
Categories
Poetry

Comments

  1. The Comedian's Avatar
    I like it, the last line in particular: it's balanced and the structure mirrors the meaning.
    Updated 02-17-2010 at 11:38 PM by The Comedian