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Are you watching me?

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Heathcliff
, 02-13-2010 at 02:35 AM (1302 Views)
Are you watching me?
Or should I disappear?
Even when I’m near you,
You don’t see me here.

I’m a part of the world,
With the love of a mother.
I can see you,
And you come from another.

Maybe I’m just blinded,
Or an illusion it is all,
It’s what makes the nations rise,
And then what makes them fall.

Could be a deep desire,
Or a challenge it may seem.
Although, if you’re not watching,
It may only be a dream.
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  1. Heathcliff's Avatar
    Ahh. Yea.

    I'd explain it but saying I wrote a poem trying to say I know best and everyone should listen doesn't sound too kind.
    Updated 02-13-2010 at 06:09 AM by Heathcliff
  2. Maryd.'s Avatar
    Cheeky.
  3. Virgil's Avatar
    No I am not.
  4. Heathcliff's Avatar
    I'm not cheeky. Much.

    Of course I've changed my mind since writing this. I should write another.
  5. qimissung's Avatar
    Ah, but I do know best...
  6. Heathcliff's Avatar
    I just mean, by that, people should take well-intended advice. Especially when they need it.

    Like, your teacher says 'study hard and you'll do well.' You're not going to say 'no!! You can't tell me what to do!!'