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Living Breathing Contradiction...

going home

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Put me down,
It doesn’t matter
Ill sink and drown
Pool without a ladder

Slap me around
I don’t mind
Go to town
Your really kind

Hope will go
At least for me
Blood will flow
What will it be

Your colors show
Interest roam
I'm not your hoe
I'm going home
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  1. Maximilianus's Avatar
    Put me down,
    It doesn’t matter
    Ill sink and drown

    (...)

    Hope will go
    At least for me

    (...)

    Self-pitying maybe? Just a question. I guess self-pity can happen even when we can't accept it when it comes from others, and I'm not saying I disagree. I really like it a whole awful lot, as usual.
  2. stephofthenight's Avatar
    Thank you max. It was wrote a while back. Just now having the guts to share it. Do not bring what happened away from litnet, to litnet, please. You are twisting words.
  3. Maximilianus's Avatar
    Okay... but I didn't really mean to twist anything. Actually it was a comment absolutely inspired by your poem, which I insist to like a lot. Of course you don't have to believe me. It wouldn't be the first time I'm distrusted. Anyways, I still believe it's a great thing.