The Nation of the Glorious Turnip

Ouch. In that, I must state the obvious, they hung themself?

Really good poem though. It is amazing how much you can say with only a few words.

Thanks! I think he either died of an overdose or alcohol poisoning though, the quiet asking doesn't really go well with the loud addictions that take over ones life. Maybe he got help in time though, you never know.

Thought provoking in the least. A sightly disconcerting poem examining a truth not usually considered. A wonderful poem!

nice one Aims. leaves a dark note.

this is actually really good...

Unusual, but interesting. What happened, you left me using my imagination. DOH!

Slightly haunting but excellent stuff.

haunting, and thought provoking. a wonderfull piece that makes you ponder it. im sure i will be thinking about it troughout the day. thanks for sharing

nice piece, but thoughts i'd rather not have.