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As lovers do...

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NikolaiI
, 01-23-2010 at 11:02 PM (1166 Views)
A single whim arises
out of an ocean of love
and from it comes creation,
which wakes and begins to move.

I know not past or future,
mere shadows of the now,
but it is the present that creates.


We live for a time in creation,
and love, as lovers do,
And, when through with being,
we'll see what's more to view.

I have a divive gift, beloved,
infinite life, eternally new,
but you are already equally adorned,
and I have nothing to give to you.
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  1. The Comedian's Avatar
    I enjoyed this poem -- especially the build up and transition to the conversational final stanza.
  2. NikolaiI's Avatar
    Thank you so much, C! :)
  3. Buh4Bee's Avatar
    Thank you for this poem. God is good.
  4. qimissung's Avatar
    I like how you took this in a different direction from a conventional love poem. It is well done, and the idea behind it is quite beautiful, Nikoiai
  5. NikolaiI's Avatar
    Thank you, Jersea; Love and Peace to you,

    Thank you Qimissung.
  6. Buh4Bee's Avatar
    Thank you, we all need to hear that once on a while and I need to hear that. It was the right moment. Peace. jersea