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Unshackling the feelings

Smoke of fantasies to lay down the burden

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Alcohol runs in the blood,
And permeats in labyrinthine veins
To fantasize the brain,
But the problems persist within --
Uncared and untouched!

The sleeping burdens crawl inside,
And the numb skin senses the cold floor,
As the smoke of ecstasies disappear,
While the unchanged reality manifest
The unsympathetic truth!
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  1. Dark Muse's Avatar
    I loved this some great lines, and so very true, drinking never solves the problems one is trying to escape from.
  2. skib's Avatar
    Rings a bell for me. That little bit of escape, even if only for a few hours.
  3. qimissung's Avatar
    I love that line ..."The smoke of ecstacies..." Artfully wrought and true, dibyendra.
  4. dibyendra's Avatar
    Thanks for all your comments, Dark Muse, Skib, and Qimissung! Acohol never solves problems but people wish to overwhelm the problems even for some moment, even if they know the aftereffect .

    @Qim: Thanks! I love that line, too!
  5. ninanoorable's Avatar
    [QUOTE=Dark Muse;bt43747]I loved this some great lines, and so very true, drinking never solves the problems one is trying to escape from.[/QUOTE]
    exactly what i wanted to say...impressive