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Girl in the Mirror/Winter Spirits

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A couple of experimental peices, taking the same basic concept in slightly different directions. I am not sure if I do condsider this to be poetry, but I wanted to try something differnet and this idea came to me, so I decided to play it out.

Girl in the Mirror

A
a girl
a girl sits
a girl sits before
a girl sits before the
a girl sits before the mirror
a girl sits before the mirror reflecting
a girl sits before the mirror reflecting upon
a girl sits before the mirror reflecting upon her
a girl sits before the mirror reflecting upon her tears
a
a girl
a girl sits
a girl sits before
a girl sits before the
a girl sits before the mirror


Winter Spirits

Winter
winter winds
winter winds whisper
winter winds whisper secrets
winter winds whisper secrets sung
winter winds whisper secrets sung among
winter winds whisper secrets sung among spirits
winter winds whisper secrets sung among spirits from
winter winds whisper secrets sung among sprits from a
winter winds whisper secrets sung among spirits from a distant
winter winds whisper secrets sung among spirits from a distant age.
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Comments

  1. The Comedian's Avatar
    Wow -- I absolutely love the first one! I love seeing the sentence develop on the right-hand, downward side of the poem, which is sort of like a reflection. One of my favorite pieces of yours, this one.
  2. Dark Muse's Avatar
    Thank you very much.
  3. toni's Avatar
    The artistic play, the words and concept are beautiful.
  4. Dark Muse's Avatar
    Thank you!
  5. Neo_Sephiroth's Avatar
    I like it! Very creative!