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A poem I wrote at lunch today.

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I don't really like it that much but I felt like posting it

Birds and Fast Food

In a food court of downtown Montreal,
I sit watching little birds fly about.
Why can I not help but look at you all
flying here and there, can you not get out?
Do you remember what the sky was like,
before this prison of crumbling concrete
and quickly snatched French fries, what it was like
before the sky was nothing but a neat
portrait on the glass of the arced skylight,
when life was free to live for all those with wings
and you could go to where ever you might:
high, low, near, far, whatever it could bring?
Or has the allure of cheap food had fast
clouded your memory of joys that last?

Updated 11-11-2009 at 11:40 PM by OrphanPip

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  1. qimissung's Avatar
    Love the philosophy! What prison walls we continually build for ourselves!
  2. OrphanPip's Avatar
    Holy hell, I wish I could edit that title lol.

    Haha, never mind I can...

    and thanks for the compliment.
  3. Maryd.'s Avatar
    Orphanpip, I love this it is honest. Wow, thank you for letting me paint a picture of reality.
  4. isidro's Avatar
    I love that title! Orphanpip, are you still in love with Estella and therefore unleashing your sentimental overtures? Perhaps you might consider the life of a convict as far more benevolent when you think about it. LOL!
  5. Heathcliff's Avatar
    Very truthful, very nice...