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Fire and ashes - 2

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The flames of fire are the claws
that devour the painless body.
Nothing remains in the end,
just the ashes, that drift astray...
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  1. Virgil's Avatar
    This and the other blog entry are so interesting diby. The ask for more. As they stand I'm not sure they really make a complete statement, but they do seem like fragments toward a more comprehensive piece.

    Welcome to the blogs section, by the way.
  2. dibyendra's Avatar
    Many thanks for your comment and greetings, Virgil! That's so kind of you. It is not a fragment, but I wanted it to be in this form, leaving the rest with ellipses, so as to leave the reader to ponder on the imageries portrayed by this poem.