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A Mirror Floating in Water

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This flowing flame
In the river of fear
Brings drought and drying to
So sticky mouth of hollow cave
Through which the river so once flowed

With desperate timing, of that
Never ending taste
Which consumed the whole body
That taste, being
Of time, time without limit
And with each swallow
With each swallow, comes life

Flowing, fasting so fluently
With logic and literacy, lingering
Once rivers run rapidly down
Creating such a dripping sound
Dripping, never drying, never devouring
Thus so it was intuitively
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  1. toni's Avatar
    Flowing, fasting so fluently
    With logic and literacy, lingering
    Once rivers run rapidly down
    Creating such a dripping sound
    ^ that reminds me of a poem I wrote a year ago!
    Well, it was along those lines as well.
    Loved this one, too. As expected
    Updated 09-11-2009 at 11:50 AM by toni
  2. DanielBenoit's Avatar
    How strange!

    Do post the poem, pleeease!
  3. toni's Avatar
    I'll think about it after I do some hunting around the web. Yours is much better though!
  4. Heathcliff's Avatar
    Nicen.

    I see you likey the water.