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A thought on solitude.

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, 07-12-2009 at 07:49 PM (1944 Views)

Beings of light traverse the stars of winter's night.
Their search for the home of tepid solitude
is interspersed with the vastness of their travels
Yet starlight brings a freedom of thought to those that see
Their solitude as a forbidden sea.

Updated 08-16-2009 at 03:46 PM by AimusSage

Categories: Poetry by the Martian King

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Comments

Virgil - 07-12-2009 07:59 PM
This has a nice ring to it Aimus. I like it.
Dark Muse - 07-12-2009 10:08 PM
Beautfiul imagery
Nightshade - 07-13-2009 05:48 AM
I really like this one aims, the flow of it is lovley. Not sure I understand the idea of a forbidden sea, but I like it none the less!
Buh4Bee - 07-13-2009 09:46 AM
Lovely and visual. I can feel the winter cold.
AimusSage - 07-13-2009 07:03 PM
Thanks everyone. appreciate the positive comments

Night It's a feeling. a bit of solitude once in a while is okay, most people even need it, but if you get stuck in solitude, you'll get lost and you'll need stars to guide your way across the sea. The stars represent the people that care about you, that are there for you if you want to get out of solitude when you are lonely. Not sure if I can explain it right, but I think this kind of covers it.
a_little_wisp - 07-13-2009 11:48 PM
( ... Hey Aims, do you listen to Muse?)

I loved this, mister. It makes me want to be on the deck of a ship, on a cold night, well-alone, and well-traveled.
Nightshade - 07-14-2009 02:05 PM
Cool beans I get it now Aims, actually now that you say that I not only like the way it fllows I like the meaning too and all around thiumb up
Solitude is addictive but dangerous!
Niamh - 07-14-2009 03:22 PM
Hey! i really like this aims! the imagery is beautiful.