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The girl who sang death and sangfroid

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I really think she is one of those
Unnerving children depicted in the
Occasional movie who stare and understand,
Who make us squirm with the power of their
magnificent and terrible understanding

Then with unswerving devotion plunge
Their hands into ones’ midriff; I can
Hear the squelching, like galoshes in mud,
And feel her feather fingers grasping, as
She searches for whatever is there,
Whether worms, long, white, tapered,
Feeding on their host, or something else,
By equal measures dross or lustrous

And by bringing it to light, attempts,
With nimble fingers, delicate as tentacles,
And with a purity of effort at odds with
Her inelegant theft, to shape it into
something resembling a jar or a tree

I only know that for myself I stood
Once before a collar of gold, made
For a boy king and ornamented with
A jewel not fashioned by the earth
But with a thunderbolt from the gods’
It lay there, still lit from within,
and in that moment I felt that glow
transfer itself from it's inanimate
quietude to my quiescent brain


and animated with it's heady light
wandered, in descant, among the crowd

Qimissung
June 2009

Updated 07-03-2009 at 01:49 PM by qimissung

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  1. higley's Avatar
    I usually refrain from commenting on posted poems because my knowledge of the subject is so minimal that I don't feel qualified to offer an opinion. But I saw this and something about the language really resonated. It reads like spiraling thoughts; I'm not sure if that makes sense but that's what it feels like and I love it. I love your word choice and how you arranged each line.
  2. qimissung's Avatar
    Thank you higley, so much. I love that it resonated. I quite understand what you mean. Usually I end up saying "It's beautiful." I say that a lot. What you said was just right.
  3. TheFifthElement's Avatar
    What an enticing opening, and the rest of the poem doesn't disappoint. You're on a roll qimi. But there's so much physicality in this poem, the words leap off the page into action. I can hear the squelching like galoshes in mud, feel those feather fingers (shudders). I'm not sure I understand it, but I don't think that matters. It is beautiful.
  4. qimissung's Avatar
    Thank you, fifth. To me it's about the act of creating. The first two stanzas are about perception, intuition, observation, discernment-you get the idea.

    The last stanza is about inspiration, and one's response to art.

    It might be talking about two people, but they are one and the same.