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Another magnetic poem

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Silas Thorne
, 05-11-2009 at 06:09 AM (1308 Views)
Trust times circles.
Know grass perfumes joy,
warm breezes linger in morning,
dance, and celebrate breathing.

Look and question less
never bore at naked colors.
Live change as the ocean-
when worry comes, embrace ferocious peace.
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  1. Silas Thorne's Avatar
    Added some punctuation to this.
  2. Virgil's Avatar
    One can always tell a magnetic poem.
  3. Silas Thorne's Avatar
    well, just playing.
  4. ChinaRose's Avatar
    well, I always like such kind of poems
  5. a_little_wisp's Avatar
    I don't know if you've read Gaiman's 'Blueberry Girl' - but your advice here is just as lovely. I love it when some poets just strip away the garble and give us sweet simplicity in wispy-worded lines of wisdom - it helps me to clear my head. I like this, Mr. Thorne.
  6. PoeticPassions's Avatar
    It's quite good, Silas. I like the last line:
    "when worry comes, embrace ferocious peace."

    the combination of words-- ferocious peace-- is great. An oxymoron, really.