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desired life

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, 04-14-2009 at 04:57 AM (1804 Views)
Desired life, without desire,
Desired life, walking in the road hand in hand,
Desired life, looking at the sky with 45 angle,
and Smiling.
Desired life, trouble is a friend,
Desired life ,with music dancing around you,
Desired life, with fresh air,
Desired life, with innovated idea

Updated 04-14-2009 at 05:05 AM by ChinaRose

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  1. Silas Thorne's Avatar
    Thanks for posting another poem, ChinaRose.
    I like the line 'desired life, with music dancing around you', but am a little confused by the 'trouble is a friend' line- is that a good thing?
    I think perhaps the last line should be 'innovative ideas'.
    Keep on posting your poems for us. We'll all get better with practice.