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This ring, you have placed upon my finger, comes at the cost of knuckles scraping along the ground. What if grazed skin, bruised and bleeding is more than I'm willing to pay?

Updated 05-07-2009 at 10:18 PM by IJustMadeThatUp

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  1. kevinthediltz's Avatar
    And you said you wern't a poet?!?!?!
    Did someone propose to you today?
  2. IJustMadeThatUp's Avatar
    I'm not,
    you snot.
    You forgot,
    I'm hot.

    There is no way in the world that you could degrade the splendour of poetry with my clumsy words.

    Not today.
  3. kevinthediltz's Avatar
    This ring,
    you have placed upon my finger,
    comes at the cost
    of knuckles scraping along the ground.
    What if grazed skin,
    bruised and bleeding
    is more than I'm willing to pay?

    Right there, just like that.
    Poem.
    Good poem.
  4. IJustMadeThatUp's Avatar
    Oh.
  5. 1n50mn14's Avatar
    ^__^ Agreed with Kevin. Ace.