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The way of my flesh

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kevinthediltz
, 05-05-2009 at 08:56 PM (1154 Views)
You are a scar
Dwelling deep inside of me
Driving me to madness,
Driving me to extinction

You are a blister on my hand
That bursts
And showers me in red warmth,
Comfort in a cold world

You are a burn
Ever present
To never forget
The hot iron I once adored

You are the way of my flesh
The hate that moves me.
Forever will you be
My love.



Yes I know its been a while but Ive been slacking on my writing. Theres bikes to fix.

Updated 05-06-2009 at 01:57 PM by kevinthediltz

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  1. IJustMadeThatUp's Avatar
    Wow that's powerful. Even though i'm not a poetry person, i really liked it and prefer it to bikes. Unless of course you start posting pics of yourself with the bikes But seriously, keep writing. You have a talent and i am jealous

    Can you just do one weensy little thing for me? Take the extra d out of madness? It's annoying me. There! That's my first poetry criticism ever. Do you feel special?
    Updated 05-06-2009 at 09:40 AM by IJustMadeThatUp
  2. Virgil's Avatar
    That is good Kevin. That is a strong poem.