Nostalgia

I like the poem. It's simple, and it states its point. But I think you could have made it even shorter, if you wished. You repeated 'the road' twice, for example. Maybe you only needed it once. Just my opinion anyway.

I really enjoyed this, just being alone and being lonely are quite different. I am often alone, and rarely lonely. Some people tend to think that being alone must mean that you are lonely

Silas- I changed one phrase in there. I hope it helps. Thank you for your input!

Dark Muse- thank you for reading! I'm happy that I was able to get across my feelings accurately enough for others to understand.

It seems tighter now.
...Would it be pushing it if I suggested you put a full stop after 'pain' in the first part, and 'nothing' in the second? or maybe that's not what you want. Maybe being too particular.

Yes, I like that. I wasn't too sure at first, but it somehow seems less personal and more . . . distant, like I was aiming for. Much appreciated, good sir!

I hope things got better, skib! I do like this poem - I feel the same way in my Ewok. There are days when I get off work and just... drive.

You're in good company, by the way -

"If you're lonely when you're alone, you're in bad company."

(I forgot who said that, but I like it.)

Thanks Wispy!

A week of angst? You mean a week of taking girls out and overthinking everything?
That sounds like us.
Good poem.

Yup.
Thanks.