The Nation of the Glorious Turnip

New subtitle for my super story thinghy

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, 04-13-2009 at 09:23 PM (2192 Views)

Wew, after almost a year of not writing anything for it. I suddenly came up with a subtitle for my story. Hopefully it is the start of a creative impulse, which will finish or at least propel my story forward towards an eventual end.

It's already planned out, I just don't know how to go about writing it, and I'm not really happy with some of the parts anyway, that need to be rewritten. Anyway, if you were wondering, the title including subtitle is

HELPING THE WORLD

the selfish confession of a murderous bastard

It fits extremely well with the story too. Now I just have to add the second part of the middle, and the beginning of the end, and I'm done, well save for all the extremely descriptive chapters, of which I've only written one so far, and need more experimentation with.

Updated 08-16-2009 at 03:52 PM by AimusSage

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andave_ya - 04-14-2009 11:37 AM
That is a brilliant title. Sounds like a modern day Notes from the Underground .
optimisticnad - 04-14-2009 02:06 PM
it's funny I'll grant you that. Slightly popular-fiction-ish, is that what you're after? And maybe 'confessions' would be better.

Would love to read some extracts, I'm thinking Patrick Bateman meets Predator . . .
AimusSage - 04-14-2009 06:51 PM
It is actually confessions on the handwritten note, but in my excitement forgot the s. Is it popular fiction? Not so sure....haha, maybe, that is not up to the writer to decide.

I wouldn't compare it to Notes from the underground though Adave ya, the protagonists do share a few character traits but the story is... different
Nightshade - 04-26-2009 01:15 PM
so This is the title then? I want to read the rest of what happens to Gregory!
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kajacker - 05-18-2009 04:12 PM
I am new to all this (internet, etc) but I'm becoming a fan! Of yours.