Nostalgia

I like this very much skib. It's so difficult to write anything new about the heart and I think calling the ribcage a "bullet proof vest" is marvelous. I believe - as long as it beats- the heart must reach. Nicely done!

Thank you! I wondered if anybody would understand this, seeing as a lot of the things I write late at night (or early in the morn) make absolutely no sense.

As you already know, I did read this. But I was on lunch and had to get back so I couldnt comment. This is a great poem. Amazing wording. And I could go into more detail on the philosophy of it, but I just told you that over the phone.
So frankly, **** you.

This is beautiful, skib, clever, and it hints at deeper layers of heartbreak and longing. *Hug!* You make perfect sense!

Very nice Skib. I liked this much:

I have no need to
explain this
as it has been demonstrated
to Heart
by break
after break
after break

Something about that repetition that drives it home.

Wisp-*hug back* Thanks!

Virgil- Thank you as well!

All your comments are greatly appreciated!

This is really cool! I love free-form poetry that doesn't rhyme. (Maybe because that's the only kind I'm "good" at? )