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I'm listening, yes?

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I'm listening, yes?
Ferocious in your mindgaze
I play distortion, on a crystal vase,
shut off from the blender,
your sharp tongue spinning around,
I hear no sound.

© Silas Thorne

Updated 03-01-2009 at 08:45 PM by Silas Thorne

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  1. ChinaRose's Avatar
    when I was at the first sight of the title of this poem, I recalled the album of The Cranberries "Are you listenig ?"
    It is a interesting poem for the lovely.
  2. Silas Thorne's Avatar
    Thanks ChinaRose, though I'm not quite sure what your last line means, sorry.
  3. ChinaRose's Avatar
    Oh, what I mean is "Your " in the line "your sharp tongue spinning around" a lovely thing.