I'm listening, yes? Ferocious in your mindgaze I play distortion, on a crystal vase, shut off from the blender, your sharp tongue spinning around, I hear no sound. © Silas Thorne
Updated 03-01-2009 at 08:45 PM by Silas Thorne
when I was at the first sight of the title of this poem, I recalled the album of The Cranberries "Are you listenig ?" It is a interesting poem for the lovely.
Thanks ChinaRose, though I'm not quite sure what your last line means, sorry.
Oh, what I mean is "Your " in the line "your sharp tongue spinning around" a lovely thing.